2nd July 2018

Chapter One ideas

  1. 2 people in love. Love controls your point of view on a person

  2. Government is controlling what people can and cannot consume, eg. sugar is illegal
    Controls what people look like – blind/blonde/ginger/blue/brown/green eyes, certain people get taken away, monsters – society controls who lives based on looks. The robots take the monsters away, drugged so they don’t have feelings and used for something.

  3. Surveillance – people have eye scanners, barcodes and fingerprint so people know who they are, where they are all the time. Flies are spies

  4. The government gives people pills to control them

Artificial Selection

Controls what people look like – blind/blonde/blue eyes, certain people get taken away, monsters – society controls who lives based on looks. The robots take the monsters away, drugged so they don’t have feelings and used for something.
She wears contacts because they looking for people with green eyes – dare not look them in the eyes for too long

People names have to start with P – p stands for pure
Pippa
Pixie
Pandora
Presley
Pollyanna
Poppy
Patience
Pearl
Paxton
Plaxico
– if the name doesn’t start with p then they are “Removed” – back during the elections of “” people were given 16 weeks to change their name (p is number 16 in the alphabet)

Pure/pristine/proper

Who
What
Where
Why
When
How
Setting
Time/place – in the future
June 22 1941 was the first eradication of the Jews during Hitler’s ruling.
The first wave happened on June 22 2141, exactly 200 years after Hitler

Intro
Para 1: The invasion/ falling of technology
Para 2: Hilter exactly 200 years later
Para 3: President explains what has happened We must remove people who bring shame to the community, who aren’t pure, who are imposters. Think about the future, imagine. Imagine waking up and looking at your perfect face in the mirror. Imagine going to work or school and seeing nothing but perfection.”
Para 4: she realises what happens to the imposters and they get a “house maid” servant lady
Conculsion: She puts her contacts in

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Writing